In Class Writing response

NAME Alexis Garcia DATE 2/12/10
TITLE Braking dawn TIME3:52 HOURS
AUTHOR PAGES -
TOTAL PAGES THIS WEEK

QUESTION 1:17. If you could change one thing in the book, what would it be? Why would you change it?
RESPONSE 1: If i could change some thing in the book it would be that there would not be hate.The reason that i i would change that is because i feel there is to much hate . I think if i would change that the book would change a lot. Every character has hate and the hate does not do any thing on the book they just have hate in there mind and they do not even know why.


QUESTION 2:7. How did what you read today make you feel? Why?

RESPONSE 2 When i finish the book i was not happy i felt like there was not enough action . It was just a story any normal story no suspense anything i feel like they did a bad job on that. There was romance but i could not feel it , like i really did not think they gave it feeling it was " i saw him n it made me happy " that is it and i do not think it describes it to much